Here is a song that Katy and I wrote in about half an hour. It needs a lot of work!
Your Associate was run over by an Iron Chariot and the Rotating Blades of Death lifted your associate and with that him being lifted my right ventricle was excised from my soulI expect ALOT of comments on this one!
[Piano + Guitar Riff]
[When over, Low Trumpet]
The white coats with circled gagdets electrocuted his weary cranium
They said he had a probability of 3 out of 5 or 60% chance of breaking through his emergency situation
[Banjo Riff]
[Harmonica Plays one not]
I waited in the room of excruciating pain
That was exactly what i felt as well
But as life goes on so did the pain
[Cue Harp]
I covered my face
I didn't want to believe
Because they have always said
It will never happen to me
[Piano + Guitar Riff]
Hours pass, Days Pass, Weeks pass, years pass
but in this case- it was only a few minutes
I get up but the only thing that was really getting up was my body
[Classical Dramatic Music Plays]
Sliding doors open and close like the blinking of my eyes
but then I realize....
.....to be continued
Have Fun!
5 comments:
That is the hottest song I have ever heard!!!!!!!!!!!!
YHESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!
:-P
it speaks to me on a spiritual level. i cant help but wonder what inspired such poetry? what provided the catalyst for such a ballad? please, impart on all of us, through your artisitc brillance, the deeper meaning here.
ps there is a deeper meaning, right?
sorry assaf.
i didnt mean to trample on your dreams.
i hope this apology saves me from hell.
HOLTZMAN FOR PREZ!!!!!!!!!!
Assaf, I am ashamed. This song, though quite good, is not NEARLY jargony enough. Throw in words like "the pain... oh it is NOT ephemeral!" And "I'd like to consider my associate a euphemism for something more, but he's just an associate..."
Instruments to write solos for: contrabassoon/piccolo duet; ophicleide; crwth (no, that is not a misspelling).
Make sure to choose an overall form for this "classical section." I'd say, take an excerpt for Tristand und Isolde by Wagner for the irony of the song.
Make sure to have some classical flowing in the background. Something simple, like a little character piece by Chopin or Mendelssohn. A nice berceuse, perhaps.
In any event, it's got promise. Just work on those things.
-Alex
Assaf and Katy,
If this does not top the charts, I will be amazed. Please, go out to Hollywood and sign with Capitol because this is a sure hit. I can't wait for the second single.
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